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My new song called the end of the world...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X6F7aqxeg3g

Listen if you dare!!!  Thanks if you do!!

Well I had a listen, and it's well done, but really not for me I'm afraid.

Ahh well, kudos for listening anyways!! nd Thanks for saying it's well done.. ;D

Although this is not my bag by any means, it’s a bit too repetitive for me; this is well a constructed and mixed piece of music. However if one were to add some screaming leads from a synth, guitar and/or sax IMHO that would take it over the top.  But that’s just my opinion and others will/may differ.

I liked the adrenaline rush, heart racing, the progress of the flight the point of exhaustion ... I really like  :- bravo

Thanks for listening guys! Much appreciated...

Certainly gave my subwoofer a good workout! ;D

This is really quite excellent for what it is.A very & hypnotic & engaging drum track...a very seductive union of energy & transcendentalism.

Though it is a bit too minimal for my pallet,I would like to collaborate with you on this one & add more melody to it,if you'd be interested.


-Thom

I liked it Timothee!  I liked the repeated sections, especially that syncopated "chrous" or "bridge" thing if you can call it that, you've got going at 1:16 and 2:28.  I felt like the second one could do with something more, though--as in a build on the first one.  In fact, if it were me, I might even be tempted to end the song with a third repeat of that motif--again building slightly on the last one--rather than doing a slow down ending on the your main theme.  I don't know... maybe that's just me.  I'd also be interested to hear what Thom would add to it...

Intersting use of changing tempo, too.

This sounds like a plan. Just PM me for a clip if you need it...  I'm rather interested in what you can come up with!!

Thanks Scott, I appreciate the comments...nice job really reaching into the song structure too! really gives me a different perspective on the piece.. for me, when creating, i didn't really look too far forward into the layout, but rather just tried to create a flow... It is sort of the way I make my music now, rather than planning a specific structure out and filling it in, I just create a beginning and make it flow through a building progression, destined to peak and taper off..

This is good...my earlier work has a habit of lacking any real bass, however I think I'm starting to catch on to the construction of a bassline a bit better...   Thanks for listening!!