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Music Auditorium => From the Shadows... => Topic started by: Servetus on June 18, 2007, 09:05:50 PM



Title: Sage
Post by: Servetus on June 18, 2007, 09:05:50 PM
Eh, I wasn't going to post this one right away, I actually just 'finished' it- it could use some more work, I know, and likely will get more work- probably more percussion.

Just wanted to see what the general opinion on it was.

Thanks,
-Servetus


Title: Re: Sage
Post by: Laguna Rising on June 19, 2007, 06:51:18 PM
Hi Servetus

Excellent thriller-movie intro, the part with glirtchy drums is rather empty, nice break and good melanchonic outro
Keep on, it works so far.
I look forward for improvement (in the central part, imo). It could use some kind of lead, but it's just my 0.02 $

Cheers


Title: Re: Sage
Post by: Oren on June 21, 2007, 04:10:51 AM
Scary....I thought my soundcard was hooped! ;D

Very effective, dynamic, keeps the listener's attention. On your final mix, it might be more accessible for the headphone user if levels were evened out somewhat. I think that a "compressed" version of this production would have the same excellent dramatic effect.

You got MY attention,

Oren.





Title: Re: Sage
Post by: elwoodblues1969 on August 18, 2007, 04:28:34 PM
The arrangement is very poetic & haunting-a brilliant piece of aural abstract art.
About :46 seconds into it,I was hoping for keyboard chords or something to that effect-but aside from that,I'm very impressed with it. 8)

Elwood


Title: Re: Sage
Post by: kara on August 18, 2007, 04:40:25 PM
Very special, some great fx in there and it keeps moving  8)
Around 1:40 it goes a bit to off to my taste, but I'm not realy a specialist in that kind of music

And just for the annecdote, I know a certain Donovan (his real name) who allways scared the hell out of me with his music  :o

k