A old/new one - a newer version is up :)

[magmavander]

Hi all,

I have founded on my hard drive 4 mp3 of four snippets I wrote sometimes ago. It was cool coz I liked these draft songs but totaly forget it. I would like to rework these songs. I have begun with one called "Down in Town". Corrected the sound, although it needs more work, removed some parts and added a very few new elements. It's a kind of smooth funk/soul theme. I made it too long and repetitive, sorry.

http://www.buzzmusic.de/download.php?id=9529

Thanks to read!

bye

mag

EDIT : The same but a change on the Infector pad. Made also some volume and eq correction + added a shaker at some place. Does it sounds better ? Here :
http://www.buzzmusic.de/download.php?id=9540

[Laguna Rising]

Hi Mag
This is track is a nice soundtrack for my evening coffee, watching people passing by.
The bass/kick drum are very loud as in dance style, but all in all it has a good feel.
A dose of your classic pads + melody

Cheers

[kara]

Cool Mag, I reconize your style which I like a lot
I agree that bringing the drums a tad back would be a good idea.
Certainly worth to finish, add a litle bit of variation to it and you'll have another great song

k

[magmavander]

Hi thanks for the feedbacks!
Now that you say it, I can hear that the drums are too present. There's plenty of things I'm not satisfied here but I liked this little theme. It has to be developed. I also think that a singer here would be cool.
I'll work on it 

bye

mag

[Wyatt]

It's already so nice..I do hope you will continue with it.

It's one of those ones that are worth the effort.

Thanks

Wyatt

[magmavander]

Thanks Wyatt!! I'm still working on it 

I have a newer version. It's the same but a change on the pad. Made also some volume and eq correction + added a shaker at some place. Does it sounds better ?
Here :
http://www.buzzmusic.de/download.php?id=9540

Bye

mag

[Wyatt]

Yeah Mag..I think I do..had to listen a few times though.

Thats what happens to me..near the end it comes down to the small things.

Great piece.

Wyatt

[FourthMansions]

A very nice one Magma!  This has a lovely chilled groove and I like the way the various sounds gradually come in and out - lots of little details that only come across on repeated listenings.