A new, Mike Oldfield-inspired track

[kara]

I speak a fourth version
'The tourist english' 

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[Marc JX8P]

Thanks for the explanation! I guessed as much from your post - though that final line didn't make any sense to me at all! Always cool to learn about local expressions, though. Those things are what keeps language interesting. Anyhoo, that's all!

[elv]

You got some pretty good material for a great song here.
when the bass comes first in it feel a litle out of place but it seem to glue more to the song further in it.
I like it, thanks for sharing

[elwoodblues1969]

Hi Elv,

Nice to see you back in this forum & I look forward to more of your music on here,if you decide to add more in the future.

Cheers,

Thom(aka Elwood)

[Northern_Fist]

I am really enjoying the vibes here.

I suppose the bass does seem to over-step the groove of the track. While I quickly got use to the rythm of the bass, I suppose the problem is more the lack of ability for the bass to display much more than its suggested pattern. Once in a while, it could swing up, fumble the notes some more, or not hit that  half note after the second beat. I really am not sure -- personally, I might not be saying much if nobody else made any comment about it, if you ask me.

Otherwise, the progressions and syth-escapades really give me a cool grin with a sense of vintage warmth down memory lane. Kudos to you. IT partially reminded me of a Tangerine Dream track without the aggresive attention to drums.