I would like to show....

[Oren]

All I can do is ask the two bosses...

I'll spew out some vocal action, and maybe rharv and mharv will go Diatribe on it. See who we can get to join in and bail us out....

Oren.

[kara]

Thanks for the contributions guys, this is going well 

@Rharv : You play guitar too  I tought you where a keyboard player  You're a band all by yourself !! 

@ Oren : Looking forward to that vocal action.
I hope mrharv will join too with some backing choir vocals, perhaps Azell can then double up the backing....
And... you'll better prepare for some completly new form of collab. I'm doing the mix in Audacity and once the song is done, I'm planning to send you the complete audacity project file to do the mastering. I'm curious how this will work out, this will become a multi OS project 

New version will be up this evening 

k

[kara]

Another idea
Can someone record a voice count-in over the 2 bar tick count-in ?
Something like 'C'mon guys let's do this - A one,two,tree,four'
We want this to sound as a live recording 

And....
We'll need a name for our band, any ideas ?

k

[kara]

New version with the guitar in the break and the follow up

k

[rharv]

I think me  guitar is a little bit intrusive on the solo, can you back it out a bunch?

Here's some horns to accompany James and play with his theme-
http://www.yourbestsound.com/Media/bluehorns.ape

..and your intro-
http://www.yourbestsound.com/Media/blueintro.ape

Hope they work!

[Oren]

Here are some vocal ideas and some snearing guitar, layered over Kara's latest track.

The arrangement is changing so rapidly that I just laid my stuff down and ran away - some re-organization is in order. And what is the story on the last 12 bar segment ...is a surprise ending planned ?

[offthewall]

 
Because I love this bass line..... here is another take on my previous effort.
This is two sections with an added guitar line overlaid.
 
James

[offthewall]

 
Oren....I didn't see your contribution before I posted!
Great stuff, man!
 
James

[Oren]

...and here are zee files...

[Oren]

James,

You have an organic feel to this initial 12 bars that will help to legitimize my dipstick solo that follows. Thanks for paving the way  !

Oren.

[kara]

I can start to play puzzle with the tracks 
I love puzzles

For the end I actually was thinking of simply stop the drums and after that have a nice descending ending guitar solo followed by some applause
Good idea ?

k

[Oren]

For the end I actually was thinking of simply stop the drums and after that have a nice descending ending guitar solo followed by some applause
Good idea ?

That might add to the "live" feel. Except that most drummers I know go berserk at the end - can't shut them up....  Perhaps a gunshot...then a scream: "oh lordy, somebody shot the drummer"...then Bob: "good timing; I was about to shoot him myself"...... 

[offthewall]

 
Try some of these....

http://www.partnersinrhyme.com/soundfx/applause.shtml

 
James

[rharv]

Playing with it here, I think Oren's guitar solo works great on the verse after his first vocals, which then leads into the organ solo... this would take a little puzzle re-arranging, but sounded very good here..
let me know if you want his guitar track this way, I already did the editing for it..

[kara]

@Rharv
Hmm, something is missing, I don't have that B section that you play on  horns, only the A section. The section after the guitar of Ofthewall is missing here....

k