elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #15 on: March 18, 2008, 10:31:53 PM » |
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Wyatt, Interesting guitar work,but it seems to be a little out of sync with the drums and quite sloppy at certain moments in this piece-which is understandable since you were just laying down an idea on the fly,so I am sure it will sound wonderful when you do some fine tuning to this piece. Despite the shortcomings,you did a fine job trying to mesh intricate guitar work with a difficult drum track. I look foroward to your progress on this.  Cheers, Thom |
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MarioD
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« Reply #16 on: March 18, 2008, 11:48:59 PM » |
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Wyatt, this is a great concept and I believe it has a lot of potential.
That was a super job blending the guitars with the percussion.
With a little polish this will be dynamite!
You may want to give the guitars a break or two and solo the drums for a few measures here and there. Just an idea, don’t know if it’ll work or not.
I’m looking forward to the finished product!
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« Reply #17 on: March 19, 2008, 01:00:47 AM » |
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Thanks guys..I will have another listen in the morning.
I am sure I can improve this.
Wyatt
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« Reply #18 on: March 19, 2008, 08:03:25 AM » |
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This piece is a whole story by itself, only congas and guitar, very interesting  I agree with other comments. Give it a bit room in some spots and you'll have to allign some chops, but you know how to do that  Good work Wyatt ! k |
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« Reply #19 on: March 19, 2008, 06:37:40 PM » |
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Kara,
Thank you for listening and for your comments.
I think this one is worth putting the effort into. It is
taking me a little bit to get used to things, but I am
having fun again, finally, and that is a good sign.
More soon.
Wyatt
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« Reply #20 on: March 21, 2008, 09:49:03 AM » |
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Here it is, finally.. I felt like cr@p the last couple days.. ..and I really didn't feel like fooling around with it.. ..but I did fool around with it.. ..a whole lot.. ..and I am really glad I did.  Thanks for all your comments, Wyatt |
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« Last Edit: March 21, 2008, 01:20:58 PM by Wyatt »
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« Reply #21 on: March 21, 2008, 12:23:41 PM » |
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I like this a lot Wyatt A minimal arrangement for a great result  k |
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« Reply #22 on: March 21, 2008, 01:21:48 PM » |
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Thanks a lot.
I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment!
Wyatt
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« Reply #23 on: March 21, 2008, 06:18:38 PM » |
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You nailed it Super! |
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« Reply #24 on: March 21, 2008, 06:23:26 PM » |
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It comes over as a sort ethnic+modern jam session - very nice.
Beautifully clean mix.
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« Reply #25 on: March 21, 2008, 08:07:04 PM » |
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Well done Wyatt ! I like the mood of it, and I like the playing style. Interesting passages Cheers |
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« Reply #26 on: March 21, 2008, 09:25:58 PM » |
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Thanks a lot guys. I appreciate you taking the time to listen, and for your comments. This was a great opportunity to get used to my new DAW, (Audition 3), and take my new computer out for a spin around the block. I am such a sucker for a chance to put congas with different styles of music. Wyatt |
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« Reply #27 on: March 23, 2008, 09:21:28 PM » |
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@Laguna..I'm curious to hear someday what you do with it! done very quickly not sure about the mix...  not sure about the melody rather empty for my standard  let me know if you like/dislike Cheers |
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« Reply #28 on: March 23, 2008, 10:13:12 PM » |
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Laguna, WOooow! I love what you did with it. Great mix and the melody is interesting and holds my attention. Yes it is a spare mix for you, but then, this is a busy drum track. Nice ending too. Thanks for sharing that. Wyatt |
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