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« on: April 16, 2008, 06:33:50 PM » |
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Hi folks! I have finally finished a first, early demo of my new song. It's only a rough mix and I can't change much at the moment. Kasimiruslav played the (real) guitars and the bass on this one. He also did the drum recording and made a rough mix. After that I added the vocals and all the other instruments such as e-piano, fake guitars and strings. I have to send him my recordings for a future version. I posted this at an early stage because I'm curious about what you think.  Cheers, Tal |
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« Last Edit: May 01, 2008, 03:25:21 PM by Talvin »
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Talvin
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« Reply #1 on: April 17, 2008, 03:47:44 PM » |
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #2 on: April 17, 2008, 05:12:09 PM » |
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Talvin, Sweet harmonies & a lush bass line...reminds me of The Smiths back in the 80's. Very decent for a rough draft...look foward to the final cut.  Thom |
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« Reply #3 on: April 17, 2008, 05:46:03 PM » |
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Good song as we are used to from you. Like Elwood said, i hear the good bass line  But I have to listen very hard, it will need some work (compression, EQ,...) at the moment the only thing it does is blur the mix  Looking forward to this k |
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« Reply #4 on: April 17, 2008, 06:23:57 PM » |
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Very nice work. Good song.
I agree the bass needs sorting out, and also think the vocal needs to come forward some.
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If you have a poem, I have a tune, and we exchange these, we can both have a poem, a tune, and a song.
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« Reply #5 on: April 17, 2008, 06:38:51 PM » |
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OK. I reworked the vocals. The rest is up to Kasimiruslav.  ) |
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« Reply #6 on: April 18, 2008, 02:53:50 AM » |
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Hi Talvin, this song has great potential. You have a strong arrangement, and really interesting vocals and backing parts (nice bass too). I would agree with Kara, that the instruments need some massaging (EQ etc..) to get them to fit perfectly into place. If this is only a rough cut I can't wait to hear the final one |
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« Reply #7 on: April 18, 2008, 05:20:33 AM » |
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Thanks Mad. The "problem" is I only have an mp3 of the bass, drum and real guitar part so I can't work on it. The virtual instruments I used usually don't need much EQqing. |
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« Reply #8 on: April 18, 2008, 12:00:00 PM » |
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Did anyone listen to the new version (reworked vocals)? The rest will follow...
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« Reply #9 on: April 18, 2008, 06:49:18 PM » |
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Just had time to listen to it. A definite improvement. Nice and clear now with more presence.
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« Reply #10 on: April 18, 2008, 08:56:55 PM » |
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Great song, Talvin. Top quality.
The sound quality of the track isn't that great at the moment ( even sounds a bit distorted at times) But I take it that will be fixed in the definite version.
I would probably give the chorus a bit more body. But that's a remark I've made once before so never mind me.
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« Reply #11 on: April 18, 2008, 09:02:07 PM » |
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Thanks. :)I can't mix the song as I don't have all the audio files I'd need. I sent Kasimiruslav my vocal takes and all the virtual stuff. I am sure he will work on the sound. There was some clipping in the wav file he sent me.
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« Reply #12 on: April 18, 2008, 09:04:24 PM » |
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Thanks. :)I can't mix the song as I don't have all the audio files I'd need. I sent Kasimiruslav my vocal takes and all the virtual stuff. I am sure he will work on the sound. There was some clipping in the wav file he sent me.
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« Reply #13 on: April 18, 2008, 10:14:01 PM » |
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Interesting composition Talvin !
An impressive song with many nice melodies and solid construction, I like your vocal touch on it.
Well done
Cheers
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« Reply #14 on: April 20, 2008, 12:55:23 AM » |
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Talvin, this is a very good song.
Clean it up a tad, it’s been said previously so I will not reiterate, and it will sound great. But this is a super start!
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