Spirit

[blipp]

Hope you enjoy. Thanks 

[Laguna Rising]

Dreaming atmosphere, it sounds like the sun is melting the mist.
I like this kind of arpeggiated theme. It develops very well with different dynamics.
Changing sounds and arrangement make it work great, without being repetitive.

Cheers

[Wyatt]

Pretty like drops of light.

Nice song!



Wyatt

[elwoodblues1969]

Blipp,

The song becomes very interesting for me starting at 1:25,as the bass line is the strongest element in this piece.
As much as I like this bass line though,I think that-because of the length of the song,there should be a break in this section...such as some chord progressions for about 8 measures.
The variations with the drum track are very good & the change in the synth lead sound at 2:29 was a great move as well,but I think the song would be more well rounded with a break in it somewhere.

It's just my thoughts,so I hope you don't mind my input...it's just the layout that I hear in my head when I listen to this piece.

It's really an evocative soundscape & superbly creative.

-Thom

[blipp]

Thanks guys. 

No Thom i don't mind at all, in fact i welcome any constructive criticism, it's one of the many ways we can all learn things about our music that we don't see our selves. 

This track is a few months old, in fact i have quite a few elecrtonica tracks i've done over the past few months that i hav'nt posted here and i'll be uploading a few here over the coming weeks, so here's hoping you don't get sick of me. 

[stuward]

Wow, excellent song.
Thanks for this.........

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