Laguna Rising
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« Reply #15 on: March 24, 2007, 05:27:47 PM » |
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Hi NeoN This is very good. i loved the guitar arp, reminded me of the cocteau twins a bit, but without the heavy effects. A nice tone ! I like the structure of this track, the melody, it'll be a killer once you add vocals ! I look forward to it Cheers |
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« Reply #16 on: March 24, 2007, 05:44:41 PM » |
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Thanx Guys...
Hey offthewall, try it, I'm curius to see how it will sound like!
HI Neon, Here goes...... just for fun! I hope you like  |
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« Reply #17 on: March 24, 2007, 05:58:18 PM » |
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It really doesn't need words
Hi there ! This is really cool ! I love it. Your playing is really expressive. You soon have the feeling it's a real instrument and not a vst emulation. A fine work Cheers |
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« Reply #18 on: March 24, 2007, 06:52:30 PM » |
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It gives the song a new dimension, very human. You should send your track to Neon so that it can be remixed. At the moment it suffers a bit from high freq's but nothing that can't be fixed with some remixing and EQ  |
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« Reply #19 on: March 24, 2007, 07:08:03 PM » |
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Wow, I am amazed by how beautifully this whistling sounds! Very very beautiful.... I'll sure include it in my Album! Lovely... |
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« Last Edit: March 24, 2007, 08:03:35 PM by NeoN »
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« Reply #20 on: March 24, 2007, 10:44:01 PM » |
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Thanks, Laguna, Kara, NeoN, for comments. I enjoyed translating this lovely tune. @Neon, If you want to take up the suggestion of Kara, to do a remix, just let me know and I can send you a solo copy of the whistle part for your 'manipulation'. Enjoyed this.  James. |
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« Reply #21 on: March 25, 2007, 08:25:41 AM » |
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Neon, James, this sounds very, very great. The whole composition sounds very human indeed. This is the kind of music that let's you forget everything for a while leaving you with a "good feeling" afterwards. Very inspiring !!!
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« Reply #22 on: March 25, 2007, 12:17:15 PM » |
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Thanks, Laguna, Kara, NeoN, for comments. I enjoyed translating this lovely tune. @Neon, If you want to take up the suggestion of Kara, to do a remix, just let me know and I can send you a solo copy of the whistle part for your 'manipulation'. Enjoyed this. James. Yes, send it to me.. |
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« Reply #23 on: March 25, 2007, 05:40:55 PM » |
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Yes, send it to me.. You have mail |
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« Reply #24 on: March 25, 2007, 07:34:24 PM » |
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Hi Guys  Here's the Track, as I mixed it with the fabulus Flute by OffTheWall! I added a little GlaceVerb to the Whistling Track.. OffTheWall: Thank you Enjoy.... |
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« Reply #25 on: March 25, 2007, 07:46:07 PM » |
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The Eq on the wistle is real good and the verb makes it fit very well in the mix
I would perhaps put it a tiny bit more upfront...
Great song guys
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« Reply #26 on: March 25, 2007, 10:29:55 PM » |
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WOW, peter.......you've done wonders with this!!! It just shows, to me as a mere novice at this game, how the production and mix can be so vital to the outcome. There is no comparison to my initial version! Well done that man! |
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« Reply #27 on: March 26, 2007, 06:39:29 AM » |
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Thanx man I tried to do my best to mix it as well as possible in FL Studio...! I used the wonderful and dramatic "GlaceVerb" (the effect on the piano & the Vibraphone as well), and a multiband compressor as well as an ordinary reverb, and of course a 7 band EQ...  Glad you liked it! Peter |
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« Reply #28 on: March 27, 2007, 03:48:02 PM » |
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Hi Neon Great Tune Buddy! Sorry it took me so long to check it out!! These came to mind I don't know where you are I thought I saw you drivin in my car I guess I pushed a little too hard Thats life It's too late now but I don't care We wer'nt going anywhere I cannot sleep without you there That's life.. Eh well I'll leave em here to see what you think. OPersonally I tend to write quickly and start sing ASAP too that way I don't second guess my self too much BTW, I REALLY DIG THIS TUNE!!! 1 |
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« Reply #29 on: March 28, 2007, 05:40:12 AM » |
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Thanx man! Nice Lyrics!! I have a vocal melody in my Mind, akind of strange... I will mix your lyrics with some phrases I've come up with, and let's see..... I will use your 2nd Paragraph as ChorusI have something in my mind with a nice ending... BTW, did you download the version with the Flutes by OffTheWall? |
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