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« on: March 16, 2007, 07:08:31 PM » |
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Hi folks! Good to see some of you are now that the Auditorium is gone (forever?). This is the 2nd version of my new song You & Me. I hope some of you'll have a listen and give me some feedback.  Couldn't up it here since the file is too big (6MB). http://up.universalhoster.net/6571_Talvin_Jones_-_You_%26_Me_V2.0.mp3 |
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« Last Edit: March 27, 2007, 03:35:39 PM by Talvin »
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FourthMansions
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« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2007, 07:43:50 PM » |
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Hi Talvin
I enjoyed listening to this. It's a nice tune which grew on me with the second listen, and the vocals are excellent - reminded me at times of Crowded House. I also liked the quiet section at about 2:50. Can't think of any real criticisms.
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« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2007, 07:54:36 PM » |
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Hi Talvin & Welcome to the Music Auditorium  And thanks for joining us I remember me commenting one of your first post on the other auditorium, saying that you should be convinced of what you are singing and don't be shy. Something you master very well now. Kara |
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« Reply #3 on: March 16, 2007, 08:33:37 PM » |
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smooth vocals and a well produced song
nice piano touches and strings
excellent man, good one...thumbs up
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« Reply #4 on: March 16, 2007, 09:09:41 PM » |
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Hi Talvin, great song, sweet melodies, cool mood! You have a very interesting voice. So put it more in front  I have no critics to give here. Instant hit! I can just enjoy... Thanks to share mag |
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Talvin
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« Reply #5 on: March 16, 2007, 10:04:21 PM » |
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Thanks for listening. Is the bass volume ok?
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« Reply #6 on: March 17, 2007, 01:03:18 AM » |
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Hi Talvin You found us! Nice tune!! Great singing on this one dude! 1 |
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Moon
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« Reply #7 on: March 17, 2007, 10:13:06 AM » |
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Couldn't up it here since the file is too big (6MB).
This is fixed: you can upload now up to 8MB. Real long songs Moon |
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Talvin
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« Reply #8 on: March 17, 2007, 11:00:40 AM » |
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Thanks Kara and also Moon for the information. |
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« Reply #9 on: March 19, 2007, 02:54:56 AM » |
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Wow, that was great. Very pro sounding, the mix is excellent. Yeah, awesome track. Thanks for sharing.
Laters...
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« Reply #10 on: March 19, 2007, 09:12:42 PM » |
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Hi Talvin.
This has turned into a great track compared to the first version. You've changed the bass and it's a definite improvement. Nothing further to comment really. Good vocals and very nice arrangement. One of your best tracks I should say. Congrats
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« Reply #11 on: March 19, 2007, 11:48:46 PM » |
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HI Talvin! Glad your here! Is this the one that Martin suggested a bass change? I liked this one a lot when I first heard it and I still do. Its very well done and enjoyable to listen to |
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Talvin
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« Reply #12 on: March 20, 2007, 04:08:50 PM » |
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Thank you al. When I've got less work to do I really must listen to your tracks and comment on them. It just keeps me so busy... It IS the song where a bass change was suggested. A friend of mine (who did the guitars on "Marie") will probably add some real guitar to the song, so there might be a future version. I'm not too sure about the (string) fills either... |
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« Reply #13 on: March 20, 2007, 08:58:01 PM » |
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Hi Talvin
I like the vocals a lot. This is well arranged and everything is ok in the mix.
A very good song.
Cheers
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Talvin
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« Reply #14 on: March 22, 2007, 11:12:19 AM » |
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Thanks. |
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