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« on: April 28, 2007, 03:53:44 PM »

Hi,

This is a song I had posted a long time ago on the old Auditorium.
I enhanced it with some more instruments, especially during Chorus.
I hope you like it.

I know about the lyrics, but they just came to my mind the time I was writing this Music  Grin

Beliefs

I do believe that everything is gonna change and never be the same now
I do believe that anything can make you feel happiness or pain, somehow
I do believe that anything is just in vain when love does not surround you
I do believe that darkness goes when you believe in the shiny light around you

When dreams ain't true
You're feeling blue, you're trying to hide
Light the inner smile
Beyond this mile, you're gonna make it up with life

I do believe this lonely road someday will be another city's downtown
I do believe that flying high will make you see a different world in your Eyes
I do believe there's always time to make up your mind and find the road you'll follow
I do believe that eyes can say what's never said in dreams that seem too hollow

Repeat Chorus

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« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2007, 04:14:58 PM »

Hi NeoN
I can't recall the older version from my mind, but this one sounds very good.
Great vocals, and for its melodic constuction Supertramp comes to mind.
Very mature song, I can't find any weak spot, here. Arrangements, production and mix on very high level: Congratulations

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« Reply #2 on: April 28, 2007, 09:03:58 PM »

 Huh Cant read it...
I dont know why I cant listen to some songs here  Cry
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« Reply #3 on: April 28, 2007, 09:39:21 PM »

HI NeoN,
You've certainly got a way with song construction!
This is super. Vocals are sumptuous, instrumentation is great and mix is superb. It's really got me hooked.  My imagination comes up with a (way in the background) lead guitar line that sounds like Guns'N'Roses.
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« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2007, 11:54:46 PM »

Hi Neon


I love this tune!! The choral parts are Cool!

Nice hooks abound! The "I don't Believe" line being the most prominent..


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« Reply #5 on: April 29, 2007, 06:04:17 AM »

I really appreciate those Comments! Smiley
Happy to hear you liked this little Song here...

This is a Song that I truly felt when I sang it, especially the first time..
Like the music was travelling me..  Smiley
Now I am getting used to it, but still I believe it's one of the Songs I wrote with my Heart..

Thanks Guys,

hope to hear more from you.. Wink
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« Reply #6 on: May 16, 2007, 07:35:30 PM »

Wow NeoN!  Your music is improving impressively. Comp (some very nice understated touches noticed) and singing are both very good. Everything is mixed pretty well and has a good feel.

Pretty song. Well done!!
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« Reply #7 on: May 18, 2007, 08:48:35 AM »

Thanks for the good words Fred!
Indeed, I added and improved many things in this version of the SOng.

Glad you liked it...  Smiley

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« Reply #8 on: May 18, 2007, 06:39:21 PM »

This is a real solid song
-Good structure
-Solid instrumentation, simple but efficient
- Good lyrics
- And, very important, a vox with character who believes what he is singing  Cool

Congrats, I love it
I feel honored that you posted it here  Wink

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« Reply #9 on: May 22, 2007, 09:03:19 PM »

Thanks so much kara for the motivating words!:)

Glad you liked the Song Wink
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« Reply #10 on: May 24, 2007, 06:37:13 PM »

This is great. A lovely melody and excellently sung with lots of feeling. The arrangement and mix sound really good too. Very professional. Thanks for sharing it.
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