pop-Rain is pouring down...

[spirulence]

This piece is one that I've been working on for a little while especially for my new gf. While I don't think its polished or long enough yet to give to her, this is about as far as I'm gonna get for the KvR contest. It's got drums shtolen from somewhere that nobody will recognize or care about, plus polyiblit on bass, plus synth1 and string synth for the pads, plus more synth1 for the lead sounds, plus yours truly on chorus and verbed out mikes. I hope you enjoy it! Lyrics are as follows:

Rain is Pouring down...
covering all
we see and do
Rain is pouring down...
it's a metaphor
for me and you

The Air is cleaner now...
rainbow splits
a brilliant hue
The Air is cleaner now...
riddance to
smoggy residue

and when I look into your eyes
I know it's true
The rain is pouring down for two

There used to be a time
not so long ago
sitting cold and alone
watching rain by my window

Rain wasn't enough
to quench the fire
a burning heart,
aflame with desire

I felt so worthless,
I needed to be saved
eyes like a madman,
soulless and depraved

and then there was you...

[Laguna Rising]

Hi Spirulence

Well, it's raining cats & dogs, here....
...I'm in the mood for your song's mood 

Nice vocal melodies and very soft pop sounds.
A good contest entry. I like it.

Cheers

[Martin E]

Well, it's raining cats & dogs, here....
...I'm in the mood for your song's mood 

No rain here this week 

Nice popsong. It's worth considering to extend it into a full version.

[magmavander]

Again a mp3 I cant read 
Bad luck...

[Laguna Rising]

Nice popsong. It's worth considering to extend it into a full version.

Yes, it is !!  it could become potential hit 

Cheers

[kara]

Good popsong idea 
You realy have to extend and finish this one.

Looking forward to the final version

k