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« on: August 14, 2011, 10:46:35 PM » |
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I found one hour to write this very short snippet (01'20). As the title said, If someone feels to add something I can make it longer (well if I find one other hour of free time).
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« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2011, 07:48:10 AM » |
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Outstanding "smooth jazz" style. Once I have some other projects mixed down and finished, I would love to work some guitar into this one.
A la prochaine...?
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« Reply #2 on: August 15, 2011, 01:01:29 PM » |
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A la prochaine...?
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« Reply #3 on: August 15, 2011, 05:38:47 PM » |
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Very nice work, very much in your recognisable style  I shall watch this from the sidelines. I like the music, but just don't have the right 'feel' to contribute. |
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« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2011, 12:47:59 AM » |
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Very nice! It's sounding a bit muddy in the lower mids though, I would roll off a bit of the lower end on the piano (which sounds lovely otherwise). Might be my speakers though. It's got a great atmosphere though so definitely something to expand on. Might need something like a muted trumpet sound or so to solo over it, or a fretless bass played high.
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« Reply #5 on: August 20, 2011, 10:21:15 AM » |
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thanks friends  You're right marc, I noticed too the muddyness. I dint EQ the song at all as I did it so quickly  |
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« Reply #6 on: August 23, 2011, 03:16:52 AM » |
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Some guitar ideas...
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« Reply #7 on: August 23, 2011, 07:50:05 PM » |
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 Absolutely great guitar lines, I love it! Wonderful inspiration. Do you want the separated loops of each instruments ? I can upload it if you want. MERCI
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« Reply #8 on: August 23, 2011, 08:26:26 PM » |
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Cool - very happy you like it!  The guitar sound is too "shrill" (needs to be mellower), and some of the ideas are repetitive, but once I have your finished tracks the guitar can be performed again with a little more finesse... Yes, please upload the tracks - here would be fine - I can work with MP3 files. (the beats-per-minute, s'il vous plaît...?) |
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« Reply #9 on: August 24, 2011, 02:53:38 PM » |
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ok here it is, I have separate each instruments in two different loops.
The bpm is 96.
The drum loops are a little longer because I used a crash cymbal at the end and if I cut it at the right length the crash will be truncated, generating a click.
I dont know how you work but I suppose you can put these drum loops on separate tracks to keep the crash ?
Thanks!
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« Reply #10 on: August 24, 2011, 09:56:07 PM » |
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The drum loops are a little longer because I used a crash cymbal at the end and if I cut it at the right length the crash will be truncated, generating a click.
I don't know how you work but I suppose you can put these drum loops on separate tracks to keep the crash ?
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« Reply #11 on: August 25, 2011, 04:57:31 PM » |
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...tout peut être accompli, mon ami... Impossible is not french... |
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« Reply #12 on: September 07, 2011, 01:52:01 AM » |
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Mag, this is a great start to some very nice lounge music. Loved it.
Oren, those were some very tasty chops my friend!
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« Reply #13 on: September 10, 2011, 05:31:55 AM » |
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Oren, those were some very tasty chops my friend!
Thanks, Mario! Here is a mix - as always, constructive criticism is encouraged...  |
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« Reply #14 on: September 10, 2011, 02:09:19 PM » |
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I'm really glad Oren stepped in on this one,because I could swear that I've heard this song from Mag like 10 times before.It's not my intention to desecrate your artistry Mag,but your material is becoming really redundant & I think you should mix things up a bit,no? Just some constructive criticism,is all. @Oren....I could swear that you've been an accomplished jazz guitarist for quite some time now...5-star-epic-guitar work,my friend!! -Thom |
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