I liked it Timothee! I liked the repeated sections, especially that syncopated "chrous" or "bridge" thing if you can call it that, you've got going at 1:16 and 2:28. I felt like the second one could do with something more, though--as in a build on the first one. In fact, if it were me, I might even be tempted to end the song with a third repeat of that motif--again building slightly on the last one--rather than doing a slow down ending on the your main theme. I don't know... maybe that's just me. I'd also be interested to hear what Thom would add to it...
Intersting use of changing tempo, too.
Thanks Scott, I appreciate the comments...nice job really reaching into the song structure too! really gives me a different perspective on the piece.. for me, when creating, i didn't really look too far forward into the layout, but rather just tried to create a flow... It is sort of the way I make my music now, rather than planning a specific structure out and filling it in, I just create a beginning and make it flow through a building progression, destined to peak and taper off..
