Sage

[Servetus]

Eh, I wasn't going to post this one right away, I actually just 'finished' it- it could use some more work, I know, and likely will get more work- probably more percussion.

Just wanted to see what the general opinion on it was.

Thanks,
-Servetus

[Laguna Rising]

Hi Servetus

Excellent thriller-movie intro, the part with glirtchy drums is rather empty, nice break and good melanchonic outro
Keep on, it works so far.
I look forward for improvement (in the central part, imo). It could use some kind of lead, but it's just my 0.02 $

Cheers

[Oren]

Scary....I thought my soundcard was hooped!

Very effective, dynamic, keeps the listener's attention. On your final mix, it might be more accessible for the headphone user if levels were evened out somewhat. I think that a "compressed" version of this production would have the same excellent dramatic effect.

You got MY attention,

Oren.

[elwoodblues1969]

The arrangement is very poetic & haunting-a brilliant piece of aural abstract art.
About :46 seconds into it,I was hoping for keyboard chords or something to that effect-but aside from that,I'm very impressed with it.

Elwood

[kara]

Very special, some great fx in there and it keeps moving 
Around 1:40 it goes a bit to off to my taste, but I'm not realy a specialist in that kind of music

And just for the annecdote, I know a certain Donovan (his real name) who allways scared the hell out of me with his music 

k