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« on: August 14, 2007, 08:42:54 PM »
This tune was composed at a very sad time.
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« Reply #1 on: August 14, 2007, 10:04:29 PM »
This sounds, to me, as if it should be a song.
If you are like me.....I write songs, sometimes, but can't really sing......why not post a framework of the words that are obviously in your mind and see if anyone here can sing it?
I'm sure it would be wonderful. You truly have an 'ear' for a melody.
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« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2007, 10:57:16 PM »
Hi James

You are quite right, it really should be a song, however at the time I composed this I was quite beyond words. I just used to sit at the keyboard and play it over and over.

Since then odd phrases have come to mind but nothing that really says what I would want to.
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« Reply #3 on: August 14, 2007, 11:05:02 PM »
A very sweet expression of your sadness & very interesting sounds.Reminds me of Enya.
I hope you take this melody further. Cool

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« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2007, 06:20:35 AM »
Sad & lovely
Not realy sure it needs words

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« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2007, 06:51:27 PM »
Thanks again everyone for your comments.

-> elwoodblues
I composed this in the early 1990s, but it is only in the last couple of years that I decided to make just a few tiny alterations,  instrument changes  and let it out in the open. I'm not sure whether, or when I'd make further changes.
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« Reply #6 on: August 16, 2007, 09:02:40 PM »
Will,

I like your style! Effective layering of synth sounds, nice blend of melody and accompaniment. Great song.

(then there's that old-school gear, and the Linux operating system on an AMD-equipped computer.... Grin)

Top notch!

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« Reply #7 on: August 17, 2007, 01:19:10 AM »
Will,
That was absolutely beautiful!
I agree that something that nice could also be done beautifully as a vocal.  HOWEVER...some of the most beautiful words I've ever heard, were notes that came from the heart.

I hear you.

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