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« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2007, 07:56:09 PM » |
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Sounds rely fresh  Good interaction of the different instruments You realy know your way in harmonisation, real good work Great song k |
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2007, 09:06:21 PM » |
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Hello, Very unusual style & a very bold and snappy drum track that I like very much. I was thinking though,that if you added some chord progressions in the backround with some reverb,that would paint a good aural picture,describing the vastness & atomsphere of the ocean. Just thinking out loud,hope you don't mind. Elwood |
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« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2007, 09:26:25 PM » |
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 I also think this is a lovely composition.  I would love to hear the difference it would make if it were transcribed into 3/4 or 6/8 time signature. I'm sure that would give it a more 'rolling sea' feel ! Just my opinion! James
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« Reply #4 on: August 19, 2007, 10:02:04 PM » |
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This is very nicely done. However, it says 'river Amazon' to me rather than 'sea'.
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« Reply #5 on: August 20, 2007, 07:29:25 PM » |
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Thanks for listening, guys, and thanks for the comments and suggestions. I'll give them a try next time I take the lid off this one.
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Martin E
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« Reply #6 on: August 20, 2007, 07:41:58 PM » |
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I like the approach you're having in this track.
I'm not too fond of the cellosound though. It seems to lack sufficient character to carry the the melody well enough. Also a second counter melody half way through would make it more interesting
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FourthMansions
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« Reply #7 on: August 21, 2007, 06:10:36 PM » |
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Hi Martin
Thanks for listening. I like the idea of a counter melody - might see what I can come up with when I have some more time to work on this one.
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Daniel Pompougnac
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« Reply #8 on: August 29, 2007, 09:08:04 PM » |
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Cool and beautiful stuff. I like ambient and classical music, so no drums is better for this kind of music, in my opinion. I like. Daniel Pompougnac |
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MarioD
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« Reply #9 on: September 08, 2007, 01:21:17 AM » |
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I really liked this. Nice choice of sounds here.
As already suggested possibly some reverb and maybe some chorus might be in order. But I’m nitpicking for sure! Plus I would not add these effects through out the song, just in select places, as this sounds damn good as is!
Just my thoughts - MarioD
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Laguna Rising
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« Reply #10 on: September 08, 2007, 09:56:40 AM » |
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Hi Fourthmansions
Nice stuff !
Very dense harmonies. I like the melody and I won't describe it as happy or sad but it sounds very good to me (for the atmosphere it builds)
Drums works good and sounds Ok
Cheers
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« Reply #11 on: September 08, 2007, 07:07:20 PM » |
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Daniel, Mario and Laguna
Thanks for listening and thanks for your kind comments. I'm glad you liked it.
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