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Title: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 12, 2007, 07:35:46 PM Here's a track I wrote at a Time when I was akind of sad or desperate I can say.... ???
I'm working on lyrics and Vocals melody as it is akind of difficult song to write lyrics for.... Tell me how you like it! (or not) :o NeoN (Whisper from the Auditorium) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: Moon on March 12, 2007, 07:51:28 PM Hi Neon, I absolutely love this one !!! Really fabulous. I don't think it is a sad song. Were I come from they call this emo-pop and most of the time a deep vocal voice start the songs and than goes up all the way. Don't know if you know but I mean but I'm think I'm referring to the style like Bono did in some of his songs (e.g. With or without you). Still, this is the kind of music that make you hair raise on your arms. Love to hear the version with the vocal. And should you leave it like this, it could even become a theme song for a movie. Absolutely a great piece !
Moon Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 12, 2007, 08:11:29 PM Thank you so much Moon.. ;)
Inspiring Words to me.. I'm happy to hear that the first person who listened to this (after me) liked it! Let's see how this piece will turn out in the end... :) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: magmavander on March 12, 2007, 08:51:57 PM Hmmm, I can't open it...
My Windows Media Player didnt recognize it. I'm under XP Pro. Sorry... bye Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: Martin E on March 12, 2007, 09:01:57 PM Sounds promising NeoN. Real Eighties feel to it. Like it.
Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 13, 2007, 06:40:51 AM Hmmm, I can't open it... My Windows Media Player didnt recognize it. I'm under XP Pro. Sorry... bye But why? I can open it with no problem.... Maybe check the option of which files can be played in your Windows Media Player! ;) Hope I helped.. Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: kara on March 13, 2007, 10:17:14 AM Lovely combination between the guitar and the piano, light and they complement each other.
You are absolute right, it is a great ballad which would be wonderfull with vocals on it. Writing text for a song is not an easy thing, I struggle with the same problem. But who knows, one we have more members here, somebody will be happy to collaborate with you ;) Kara Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 13, 2007, 11:48:01 AM Thank you Kara ;)
Nice to hear these good words... NeoN Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: blipp on March 19, 2007, 02:44:16 PM This is very good. i loved the guitar arp, reminded me of the cocteau twins a bit, but without the heavy effects. The arrangement is well put together and it will sound even better with vocals. I played along to this with my own guitar. Good work.
Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 20, 2007, 08:00:29 PM Hi blipp, great to see you here ;)
Thanx for the comments and for playing my song on your Guitar! I'ts a kind of difficult for me to find some lyrics for this song though.... See you.. NeoN (whisper from the old auditorium...) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: Fred S on March 21, 2007, 07:14:37 PM Yeah, this is real nice, Neon (aka Whisper). Lovely vibe.
I'ts a kind of difficult for me to find some lyrics for this song though.... Just let the song and the emotion sit in your head awhile, I'm sure the words will come along. Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: offthewall on March 21, 2007, 11:17:25 PM Hi there, NeoN,
I just been listening to this beautiful tune of yours. It really doesn't need words, if you can't find them....the tune speaks for itself! I don't know if your familiar with my own music (see 'artist page' here on Kara-Moon), but I am well into traditional folk music with 'real' instruments. I would really love to try putting a (irish style) whistle to this tune, if you would let me? :) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 22, 2007, 08:36:06 AM Thanx Guys...
Hey offthewall, try it, I'm curius to see how it will sound like! Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: Moon on March 22, 2007, 07:54:48 PM Hi there, NeoN, I just been listening to this beautiful tune of yours. It really doesn't need words, if you can't find them....the tune speaks for itself! I don't know if your familiar with my own music (see 'artist page' here on Kara-Moon), but I am well into traditional folk music with 'real' instruments. I would really love to try putting a (irish style) whistle to this tune, if you would let me? :) OK, I'm really waiting to see how this will sounds like cause this song has something very magical. The whistle sounds like a great idea. Looking forward... ;) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: offthewall on March 22, 2007, 11:14:19 PM ;D
Great fun...... I'll see what I can do over the weekend. ;) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: Laguna Rising on March 24, 2007, 05:27:47 PM Hi NeoN
This is very good. i loved the guitar arp, reminded me of the cocteau twins a bit, but without the heavy effects. A nice tone !I like the structure of this track, the melody, it'll be a killer once you add vocals ! I look forward to it Cheers Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: offthewall on March 24, 2007, 05:44:41 PM Thanx Guys... Hey offthewall, try it, I'm curius to see how it will sound like! HI Neon, Here goes...... just for fun! I hope you like ;) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: Laguna Rising on March 24, 2007, 05:58:18 PM It really doesn't need words Hi there !This is really cool ! I love it. Your playing is really expressive. You soon have the feeling it's a real instrument and not a vst emulation. ;) A fine work Cheers Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: kara on March 24, 2007, 06:52:30 PM It gives the song a new dimension, very human.
You should send your track to Neon so that it can be remixed. At the moment it suffers a bit from high freq's but nothing that can't be fixed with some remixing and EQ 8) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 24, 2007, 07:08:03 PM Wow, I am amazed by how beautifully this whistling sounds!
Very very beautiful.... ;) I'll sure include it in my Album! Lovely... ;) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: offthewall on March 24, 2007, 10:44:01 PM Thanks,
Laguna, Kara, NeoN, for comments. I enjoyed translating this lovely tune. @Neon, If you want to take up the suggestion of Kara, to do a remix, just let me know and I can send you a solo copy of the whistle part for your 'manipulation'. Enjoyed this. ;D James. Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: Moon on March 25, 2007, 08:25:41 AM Neon, James, this sounds very, very great. The whole composition sounds very human indeed. This is the kind of music that let's you forget everything for a while leaving you with a "good feeling" afterwards. Very inspiring !!!
Moon Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 25, 2007, 12:17:15 PM Thanks, Laguna, Kara, NeoN, for comments. I enjoyed translating this lovely tune. @Neon, If you want to take up the suggestion of Kara, to do a remix, just let me know and I can send you a solo copy of the whistle part for your 'manipulation'. Enjoyed this. ;D James. Yes, send it to me.. ;) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: offthewall on March 25, 2007, 05:40:55 PM Quote from: NeoN Yes, send it to me.. You have mail ;) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 25, 2007, 07:34:24 PM Hi Guys :)
Here's the Track, as I mixed it with the fabulus Flute by OffTheWall! I added a little GlaceVerb to the Whistling Track.. OffTheWall: Thank you ;) Enjoy.... Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: kara on March 25, 2007, 07:46:07 PM The Eq on the wistle is real good and the verb makes it fit very well in the mix
I would perhaps put it a tiny bit more upfront... Great song guys Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: offthewall on March 25, 2007, 10:29:55 PM WOW, peter.......you've done wonders with this!!!
It just shows, to me as a mere novice at this game, how the production and mix can be so vital to the outcome. There is no comparison to my initial version! Well done that man! ;D ;D ;D Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 26, 2007, 06:39:29 AM Thanx man ;D
I tried to do my best to mix it as well as possible in FL Studio...! I used the wonderful and dramatic "GlaceVerb" (the effect on the piano & the Vibraphone as well), and a multiband compressor as well as an ordinary reverb, and of course a 7 band EQ... (http://www.dasample.com/images/screenshots/glaceverb.jpg) Glad you liked it! Peter Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: one on March 27, 2007, 03:48:02 PM Hi Neon
Great Tune Buddy! Sorry it took me so long to check it out!! These came to mind I don't know where you are I thought I saw you drivin in my car I guess I pushed a little too hard Thats life It's too late now but I don't care We wer'nt going anywhere I cannot sleep without you there That's life.. Eh well I'll leave em here to see what you think. OPersonally I tend to write quickly and start sing ASAP too that way I don't second guess my self too much ;) BTW, I REALLY DIG THIS TUNE!!! 1 :) Title: Re: A demo with no Vocals yet! Post by: NeoN on March 28, 2007, 05:40:12 AM Thanx man! ;)
Nice Lyrics!! I have a vocal melody in my Mind, akind of strange... I will mix your lyrics with some phrases I've come up with, and let's see..... I will use your 2nd Paragraph as Chorus I have something in my mind with a nice ending... BTW, did you download the version with the Flutes by OffTheWall? |