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Author Topic: Did some work on my November contest song...  (Read 6218 times)
TheBellows
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« on: November 12, 2007, 09:31:10 PM »

Like i said i did some work on the rock song called "Finally". I doubt that will be the final name for it though.  Tongue

The song is mostly made in Renoise, which might be a bit weird for a rock song, but i'm a Renoise user and just love making music with it  Cheesy

It still needs some work on the drums and i'm supposed to add vocals. A shame i suck when it comes to writing lyrics, i'm never satisfied with what i write...

Any comments are appreciated  Smiley

* mix2.mp3 (5751 KB - downloaded 295 times.)
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« Reply #1 on: November 12, 2007, 09:44:22 PM »

Nice work you've done on this
You have a rock solid for a good rocksong there.
It just screams for good lyrics

A shame Azell doesn't sing in english Grin

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TheBellows
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« Reply #2 on: November 12, 2007, 09:50:44 PM »

Thanks Kara!  Smiley

If i was to be true to my language i'd have to sing in Norwegian, hmmm....  Wink
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« Reply #3 on: November 12, 2007, 10:23:42 PM »

Really good strong, driving, song structure......ya gotta get some vocals in there, man!


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« Reply #4 on: November 13, 2007, 05:18:00 PM »

Yep ! everything's fine so far
I like your work and I agree it seems structured for vocals

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« Reply #5 on: November 15, 2007, 11:53:34 AM »

Thanks guys, i'm working on som phrases now  Smiley
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« Reply #6 on: November 20, 2007, 09:08:15 PM »

Hi TheBellows,

I cant say better that what already said before  Grin
I enjoyed listening!

Thanks

bye

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