elwoodblues1969
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« on: May 29, 2008, 11:16:40 PM » |
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Wrote this song for my fuzzy little friend...the guy who single-handedly keeps me sane in an insane world....
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« Reply #1 on: May 31, 2008, 07:51:48 AM » |
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Nice melodies, I like the 'progressive' opening at 0.40
I think drum sound could be a bit less 'dry' less 'punchy'
Good job
Cheers
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« Reply #2 on: May 31, 2008, 10:06:07 AM » |
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I agree, it has a very good intro. And, well... I have to mention that good bassline ! You are pretty good with basslines Thom  A shame the song is that short, it realy could become a good complete song k |
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #3 on: May 31, 2008, 03:10:30 PM » |
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L.R., You're right about the drums...I guess it's just my old habits of using aggressive drums-like in my Autobahn songs.  The song started out as a tiny piece of music that sat idol in my keyboard for a while...I then added a little more to it and then I decided to post it...wasn't really sure what the final outcome would be,so it's still just an idea. Thanks for the input and compliments.  Thom |
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #4 on: May 31, 2008, 03:20:24 PM » |
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Kara, More than likely,I will add to this piece at some point and when I get my Kurzweil PC3-I'll have no excuse not to work on it further! I'm very pleased that my bassline meets with your approval. ;DThanks for the kind words. Thom |
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« Reply #5 on: May 31, 2008, 04:53:38 PM » |
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I like the melodies too, and also thought it could be longer.
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #6 on: May 31, 2008, 11:18:40 PM » |
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Will, Well,I guess all the votes are in,I'll just have to make it longer then. Thanks, Thom |
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« Reply #7 on: June 01, 2008, 08:52:30 AM » |
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Yes, by all means, make it longer. I agree with Kara..you always have interesting basslines, and I really like this one. Nice looking little fella you have there..Tyler looks like a real sweetheart. Wyatt |
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« Reply #8 on: June 01, 2008, 09:20:22 AM » |
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Hi Thom A beautyfull, calmly song. Very nice.  Look what my cat (Kasai) think about the insane world. Andreas |
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #9 on: June 01, 2008, 01:22:43 PM » |
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Wyatt, Thanks for the kind words...yeah,Tyler is my bosom buddy...an absolute joy. Andreas, Thanks for the nice comments...wish I could sleep as peacefully as your friend there..thanks for sharing the photo. Thom |
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« Reply #10 on: June 02, 2008, 02:22:21 PM » |
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Tom, I agree with what’s been said already.
Another gem waiting for completion!
Great start!
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elwoodblues1969
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« Reply #11 on: June 02, 2008, 02:29:15 PM » |
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Mario,
Thanks for the comments.Actually,my song; "Tyler & Selma",is the completed version of "Tyler's Love".
Thom
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