Booze Makes You Stupid

[Oren]

i couldnt resist...lol.
its rough...but just a giggle.
done in an hour...

Sounds better than McCartney... - even sounds like you conjured up Ringo on the drums!

Ed,
I'm up for "ghosting" this tune, and collaborating on a song of our own with this basic chord structure and some fresh lyrical ideas...

[manning]

Oren.
re sounds better.
your too kind mate..but i just didnt have time.(tons of flaws.)
cos i was baby sitting my dear doggie thats just
had some surgery. (all went good.).
i was just poncing around with it for laffs.
didnt even have the time to do vocs properly.
cos many family things to do.
blinkin tax season ya know..lol.
so just one shot ruffs. n guides.
it needs to be done properly with proper backing etc etc.
frankly i would like to do it properly n it needs a live drummer also.
n bass support n lots of other things.


i would like to comment bout one thing.
re songwriting.  
i feel what the song illustrates is the importance of
hooks , paceing/tempo and  how even simple chord structures can be very effective.
i used to have blazeing debates..lol.. with good folks into chamber music and
various advanced chord structures. who would look down on this type of song.
my argument was often however you just cant beat a well produced
danceable song with a good beat.

like you i'm up for anything.
particularly uptempo that ROCKS..lol.
ps..watch the drummer carefully in the you tube vid.
superb drummer.

[Oren]

...and in LAME VBR to play back on your mp3 hardware...