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« Reply #15 on: September 15, 2007, 05:38:31 PM » |
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Will, I'm trying to find some time to look at this. Could you let me know the chord sequence to save me a bit of 'messing about'. Thanks  James |
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« Reply #16 on: September 15, 2007, 07:17:49 PM » |
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ok Will, a litle sound check
you have 3 choices :
1. Clarinet
2. Flute
3. Don't like it, forget it
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« Reply #17 on: September 15, 2007, 07:38:38 PM » |
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Clarinet, definitely  I couldn't download the 3rd option so dismissed it straight away  |
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« Reply #18 on: September 15, 2007, 08:03:05 PM » |
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ok,.... Azell just told me you have more taste then I have, I prefered the flute  k |
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« Reply #19 on: September 15, 2007, 08:19:18 PM » |
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Will, I'm trying to find some time to look at this. Could you let me know the chord sequence to save me a bit of 'messing about'. Thanks James Oops. Nearly missed this  verses 1, 2 & 4 C(2), Dm(1), Dm(2), Em(1), C(1), C(2), Dm(1), Bdim(2), C(2), Dm(1), Em(2), F(1), Em(1), Bdim(2), C(1) - 2 bars verse 3 F(1), F, Bb, F, C(1), C(2), Dm(1), F, C(2), Dm(1), Em(2), F(1), Em(1), Bdim(2), C(1) - 2 bars The bracketed terms are the chord inversion. You'll see the 3rd verse lines up with the others on its 9th bar. |
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« Last Edit: September 15, 2007, 09:48:46 PM by folderol »
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« Reply #20 on: September 15, 2007, 09:25:58 PM » |
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Thanks Will. P.S. dunno how to get a 'flat' symbol Well, I would just go for 'little bee'.....as in 'Bb' James |
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« Reply #21 on: September 15, 2007, 09:48:15 PM » |
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Done
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« Reply #22 on: September 15, 2007, 10:05:46 PM » |
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Yup, just found them myself. J |
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« Reply #23 on: September 16, 2007, 01:29:35 PM » |
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okay  Let us know what you think of this Azell asked me to tell you 2 things If you compose for windplayers please consider 2 things > Give them some air from time to time > When you put accidentials in your melody don't make them too short, the air has to have a change to flow... You turn now James  k |
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« Reply #24 on: September 16, 2007, 04:50:21 PM » |
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I'll try to get somthing done with this tomorrow.  James |
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« Reply #25 on: September 16, 2007, 06:22:56 PM » |
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okay Let us know what you think of this Azell asked me to tell you 2 things If you compose for windplayers please consider 2 things > Give them some air from time to time > When you put accidentials in your melody don't make them too short, the air has to have a change to flow... You turn now James k playing is good, and timing much smoother than my line. I can see the problems with some of my 'twiddles', but then the only wind instrument I've ever played (not well) was a penny whistle which can respond much faster of course. I had tried to leave some breath space, but obviously not enough, or in the wrong places  But, erm, I thought we were going with the clarinet  That's the flutiest clarinet I've ever heard  |
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« Reply #26 on: September 16, 2007, 06:25:47 PM » |
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I'll try to get somthing done with this tomorrow. James Great. You've got lots of clear 'headroom' so please feel free to fill it P.S> We can fight with kara about the clarinet later |
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« Reply #27 on: September 16, 2007, 06:29:03 PM » |
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For the sound, I actually tought of something that would go well with the pennywistle of James
We'll see how it works out...
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« Reply #28 on: September 16, 2007, 10:37:41 PM » |
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OK.....first try! I've simply taken Kara's version and tried to compliment Azell's beautiful 'clarinet' playing. What I would like to do (when I can find the time) is to have an extended version, maybe twice as long, and put in a 'Marc Knopfler' style guitar....way in the background with loads of 'verb......! Anyway....this is today's quick version! James
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« Reply #29 on: September 17, 2007, 08:42:19 PM » |
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The sound of the whistle works well in the mix (still think we need a clarinet though), and I see the outline you are following, but I wonder if the piece is actually too slow or indistinct, as you seem rather hesitant. Would a click track or line help do you think? Mind you I'm probably being a bit unfair as it's your first shot at an unfamiliar tune. I would like to hear a Knopfler style guitar backing this. That would be really good. How would you envisage it being extended, repeat verses or new variations? P.S. I consider myself fortunate that nobody will ever hear my first attempt at the original melody  |
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